Where once the new day brings a fresh mind,
Long days lend their way to fatigue thoughts.
By the end it is all black and blue,
The feeling of monotonous dread.
The wind down brings relief and elation,
Feeling the thaw deep within.
Warmth begins to turn it an amber shade,
Radiating throughout like glowing coal.
Wonderful sweet, the sound of love,
Enveloped in an embroidery of color.
The secluded sparks of yellow rays,
Penetrate my being on the way to renewal.
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I wrote this using Poefusion's Friday 5 from 9/26 and the Tuesday Title from 9/30.
Angel, this is top notch. You wrote so beautifully of your mind and what colors it brings forth. Thanks for sharing this. And, thanks for stopping by Poefusion. Always nice to see new faces. Welcome. Have a nice day.
I loved the colors in this piece: black and blue, amber. They reflect perfectly the feelings. Also loved the imagery in "Radiating throughout like glowing coal" and "Wonderful sweet, the sound of love". Great poem, love! :-)
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