Tuesday, February 17, 2009

My Crush


A fluff of black fur
White wisps, soft and cuddly
Purr, sweet sound of joy
So full of friskiness.

White wisps, soft and cuddly
Whiskers rub my leg
The soft fur under chin
Begs for some rubbing.


Purr, sweet sounds of joy
White tummy of softness
A rub of the head
Soft strokes satisfy her.


So full of friskiness
Playing to and fro
This ball of black and white
My sweet little Crush.


This poetic form is a quadrilew as prompted from Poefusion. Created by C. G. V. Lewis the quadrilew is a form of the quatrain with an abab rhyme scheme, repeating lines and an alternating syllable count.

2 comments:

J. S. Clawson said...

What a nice photo of our two babies! Your poem is full of imagery, I can hear her purring and see her playing around in it. Good job with the form too! :-)

poefusion said...

Hello Angel~ What a wonderful job on the form. You're the first to try it. Your cats are beautiful. We have a black and white cat also but, he's got shorter hair. His name is Smidget. Thanks for giving this form a try. Have a nice night.